Monday, August 19, 2013

Page 5, Cosmo's Apples

Cosmo knows he is being followed...
Please come back next Monday for page 6 !

Again, I jumped to quickly from panel to panel without telling the story.  I don't know if I really fixed it here but it is what it is.  Originally I had a scenes of Cosmo overlooking his field, then picked apples, then took them to town to sell....I neglected the kids and had to bring them back into the story...I liked the selling apples panels but thought it did not fit and will bring them back later....